Ms.+Carlyles+messages.+(feedback)

May 28th, 2011

Hey team, Two things. Dominic and Graham, your essays are not done. (Amber- yours either but you have more substance in it...) You did not follow the procedure anchor. An essay has more components. You know that. This assignment is worth a lot. If you are interested in getting more then a level one, you must think carefully and apply everything that we have been working so hard at this term. PLEASE take this seriously. I will hve my computer and paper and you will do it at Celtic if need be. It was due Friday, you had time and support so no excuses. (plus I gave an extension!!!) Kristen and Dominik nice job and Amber, you are so close. Graham, you have a good start, please just think about all the components including a counter argument and details to support three arguments for or against. Please wiki me if you have ANY questions. You can do it! Ms C :)

Hi there Team! Glad you added it! Now I can let you know what a great job you are doing so far. Remember to be careful in how you explain the shows. It is not just based on your emotional response. Consider the target audience. Perhaps research that and ask yourself what shows have the highest ratings and why. You might be surprised! Keep up the great work and remember to be supportive and get some good dialogue going! Have fun! Ms C :)